by Pandora33103
wtf?
she had already told her name to him in the 1st chapter so why didnt he recognise her then ?
and why had she forgotten the reason she was at his house why didnt she told him she wanted to be his maid and not an anal slut?
why is he so into dry anal fuck and that too the woman he claims to lovd (which i stll dont believe he is marrying her out of guilt for sure) why is he still into destroying her ass and not use some lotion / oil into her ass or his cock
why cant he fuck her like a normal person ?
not even in any of your single chapter of your story i have witnessed rose having a climax or jeremy making love to her
its always he fucks her ass more than pussy like an animal and cums first and never borthers to make her come ,kiss her or any foreplay
its just plsin dry anal pounding in all the chapters sex and erotic parts all missing with the rushed and forced stories
the fact that him organising a fake auction just to break her hymen with his prick or cancelling the contract before just to again marry the same same girl and all these kept hidden from the readers just to force a twist in the story it suckd really not nicely crafted or executed
and the sex seems more to be anal sadism or pain fucking or orgasm denial ,pleasure only for man and pain only for woman
yeah 1 star