All Comments on 'The Transformation Device Ch. 05'

Loved this story but would love to read more. Thanks

A lot of twists made this great but this part seems like too short.

The machine has such wonderful potential for transgenders. Unfortunately the potential for abuse is too great to allow it to exist. Great story. Looking forward to the return of Dr. Shelly. I find it ironic that the author of FRANKENSTEIN was also

English with the last name of Shelley.

This has been one of the best stories I have read on here or indeed anywhere else! Even without the sexual content this would have been a fantastic Sci-Fi story so well done :) also I would love to see the hint at the end expanded on! Please do a sequel :)

This is one of my favorite stories on Literotica. Well written. I care about the characters. But also very erotic. I like the plot. Also tickled my sexual funny bone - forced physical change.

This was a great story! Loved the writing, sci-fi component and the sexual content. This would make for a great movie if made well with toned down sex, but would be amazing with all the dirty sexy scenes as an adult flick. Looking forward to a sequel!!

Great story, loved that mysterious ending.

Fun story! Thanks