by chopblock
This was a fun story to read, and obviously not intended to address the issue of infidelity or monogamy in any serious fashion. chopblock did a pretty good job of covering a lot of the fantasy bases in terms of who the couple got to play with.
The only thing that leaves me wondering is the mindset behind Sandy's reverting to her old more conservative sexual habits. I would have liked to see more about that issue being addressed.
From a narrative standpoint, the pregnancy bombshell was not explored as fully as would seem merited. At the same time, after 21 pages, I can imagine the author getting a bit tired of the story and wanting to conclude things quickly.
Too many issues left up in the air, the big one is what would Sandy say about the Baby. But the whole adventure caused all of the other marriages to disintegrate, the next would be Sandy's if she still had any attraction to Bill. Group sex cannot every be good for a marriage.