All Comments on 'The Treehouse'

Another chapter? Good "Tarzan" story.

Tarzan reinvented…actually a good plot idea!

Holy cow, you HAVE to keep adding to this story. it has so many possibilities.

Good basis for a very interesting stories with lots of potential. Nice that you take your time. Editor would be good but don't sweat it. Story over grammer and spelling!

I have been working on Audible writing but after the time it takes to correct all the errors I'm better off typing. I have lots more planned for this I just wanted feedback. No editor has responded to my request. I would even enjoy a joint effort. I have plenty of ideas and thoughts but I get bogged down in details. Before I finish a page I make dozens of changes.

Spoiler alert I plan on a harem and a family. I'm afraid I'll drag this out too much and worried about keeping too short all at the same time.

I just submitted another chapter, last time it was 2-3 weeks before it came out. This ones a little shorter so maybe it will be faster.

Great start. Looking forward to more.

A very interesting start. Fairly well written. Like it

An interesting and intriguing story that’s fairly well written.