All Comments on 'The Trick is in the Treat'

it would have to be terri or cass, at least those would be the most interesting in my oppinion lol, great story

chose eva

wild child

That was incredible. I wasn't anticipating that twist at the end.

that was hot. I say Eva should be the one

Would love to read a sequel. And I would like to see him with Terri or Cass but I am leaning toward Cass. I love the chemistry between them.

An excellent read start to end. I would choose the feisty one Eva, at least Victor could then get used to the control needed for the next visit and who knows maybe even turn the tide on Terri... either way great story..

Great story I would really like to see the follow up.

Well I loved the story and it is a tough decision on who to pick but I like the cass because she squirts and eva because she liked the anal so I at least narrowed it down to 2.

I believe Cass should be the girl cuz she was really into him.

Definitely put in a sequel for this!!!

i read your biography... you don't need to take notice of anonymous low scorers.. you are a good enough author not to have to worry about anyone small minded enough to deliberately try and artificially or unfairly do your efforts down.

keep on writing for your enjoyment knowing that there are many out here in cyberland who really appreciate your efforts. Thank you

I won't say who I think you should pick based on my biases (got a thing for redheads). I do however wish for you to write another, maybe two? I'd love to see where this goes and how your world expands as the story develops!

Again, Awesome job, can't wait to read more.

All of the girls were wonderful, but I got the impression that you wanted us to prefer Cass. Maybe that's my own bias coming through, but she shared an emotional connection the others didn't. If he's going to have a future with one of them, I think she's the obvious choice.

Great story. Please keep writing.

THE BLONDE

Great Story!!!!! cant wait for the sequel most def. it has to be Cass

Terri!!!!!!!

I like all four girls. A sequel for 1 year later would be very appropriate. Hopefully three of the girls were impregnated.

Well written and very imaginative. Hope to see further chapters.

That was just an excellent piece of erotic fiction. The descriptions were vivid, and provided a multi-orgasmic experience for me while reading it.

So who does Victor choose? Actually, the way you wrote it, I felt he was most connected to Terri...the one he can't choose. It seems like the perfect scenario, if she goes around living a normal life during the year. She and he could be lovers...and she'd never have to go and "milk" anyone else.

But if that isn't an option...then I'd say Cass. She seemed to have more of an emotional connection to him...it felt as though it could be more than just a casual fuck in the future. So that's my pick.

Anyway, what a yummy read. Bravo!

Gotta love the Asian influence...

Great story. This is one of the few stories that was worth every single page that it took up. A few others I feel that have accomplished this as well are DamonX are BlueDragonAuthor. In fact, if it means anything, I very rarely leave a written comment of any sort.

Good luck on winning the contest, and I hope you do get a chance to writing a sequel. Please have him pick Eva :P

... I have no problem voting for Lucy because of my thing for redheads. I'd love to see a sequel. I also think there's no reason not to pick Terri. If he stays with the one of the other three he has to explain every year why he's 'not in the mood' for two months before halloween so he can save up for her. There are many ways you can go with the next chapter and I'm looking forward to it.

WOW !

I vote for Cass. I'll be looking out for the sequel. How does Terri pick the girls? where does she find them?

A woman who loves anal is my kind of woman! My husband loves that I am all for a night of anal fun. The only problem is when he asks me to pick a hole!lol I guess you have my vote. This is the first story this long that I took the time to finish. Excellent job!!

o really liked your writing and personaly think it would be cool if he picked the succubise well actually i dont know if you were making out to be on but thats what she sounds like to me but if he picked teri

Yes, you should definitely make a sequel... maybe she could come to love him one day... only time will tell.

Very well done!

But then I usually pick the blonde...

Cass is the obvious choice, as she can be the loving wife and mother of his children. Eva is too wild and Lucy is too vague of a character. Cass FTW!

I always pick redheads. I think they are sexy and appleal to my Celtic heritage. but Big Tits and a fuzzy pussy are nice turn-ons too.

Do write a sequel, Maybe how Terri selects the women and seduces them to join in the fun?

Great story, add some humor to the Victims second session?

I absolutely loved this story, it's been a long time since I've read one this good. That being said, Victor should definitely pick Cass, she's cute and the way the story was written he seemed to have a thing for her more so than the others. Plus I think the shy girls are hot.

victor should cosse cass. this was awesome. yes sequal!

Excellent story. Good characterization, which can be a problem with so many females. You did a good job of keeping them distinct. I also loved the dialogue. It really made me feel like I was there. Not to forget the nice twist at the end.

Cass gets me vote as the chosen partner.

Please write a part 2!!

Jerry

Pick the redhead. It's nice to see a story with a great concept which is well written. Pick Red.

He should pick Lucy

I think he should pick terri dat way he can help ha out n da could do da nasty all da time...dis was da best story on here

Simply because of the apparent connection he felt with her when they kissed during the description phase. I guess I'm a romantic at heart, so that connection was important to me.

A great story with a great twist and I think Cass is the one I would pick.

Loved it !

I vote Cass as well

Cass is the one, Lucy is 2nd.

My vote Lucy First, Cass Second

EVA!

When I have a choice I go for big bodies (greater than 5' 7" tall) with big boobs. And two of a kind is really good too.

I vote he picks Terri, rather than one of the sleeping girls. (She could consent as it would allow her to "milk" him every day)

This was an awesome story. You've got talent.

Eva

If he can't choose Terri, I say Cass!

This is a great story, and I would love a sequel. I would imagine he would choose Cass, because of her loving nature, but it is a very hard choice. Whoever is chosen, if there was a way to incorporate the other two into the sequel it would be great. I had thoughts (just suggestions mind you, YOU are the storyteller here) that Terri and the other two entertain our hero for Halloween, while the choosen third is very pregnant (and participating) and ends up delivering another Halloween child. Or something like that. ANYTHING to keep the storyline going. Thanks for the great story.

By an author that doesn't bother to finish their story. A "1".

Hi Anon, just send me your details and I will give you your money back...

But actually I have to admit it is a fair call, I promised more and as yet I haven't delivered.

Another chapter will come (lightning, out of control cars and drive by shootings permitting), but I just don't know when.

Please be patient, there are so many stories running around my head and I can't do them all at once.

BB1212

I know I'm writing as anon, but I'm at least trying to be helpful. Take your time, let the story progress naturally. It would suck if you rushed and the sequel wasn't as good. I like the idea of Cass being chosen, for the same reasons as has already been pointed out. It would flow with the already apparent connection. Good luck.

Cass

Cass-Per the squirter!!

TERRI

Because he can proof his promise and she can live her next door girl life.

I hope to read a sequel.

I wish that she would reconsider and allow him to keep all three.