All Comments on 'The Trip'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

Sex? Sure. But, somehow, simply not erotic.

Two stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great job! You should write a sequel!

debaclesdebaclesalmost 2 years ago

Good premise and nice mix of fun sex scenes, but refers to Jack by other names a couple times which disrupted the flow of the story for me. Also doesn't need the last bit about the drive home, seemed a bit out of place...could just end with them heading into the shower.

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