All Comments on 'The Triskele Collar Ch. 12 - Epilogue'

Too close to one of the illegal taboos for anyone's comfort, I think. Also, the seam you can work there's pretty limited, as other writers in the area have found: animals tend to lack imagination.

*Linzi's adventures conclude in 'The Triskele Consort'* Looking forward to seeing Linzi get knocked up. Also, the Great Cataclysm story sounds like a good idea. I'm looking forward to reading anything you choose to write.

I didn't have any problem with the hogglig episode. Sometimes you need to threaten your characters with awful stuff in order to create dramatic tension. I thought you did it rather well.

And that title applies to every chapter so far, and I suspect I will enjoy the consort series even more as I love a compelling story.

The one downside is now I'm super sexually frustratef , and have no slutty little pleasure imp of my own to scratch that Itch xX