All Comments on 'The Trouble With Emily Ch. 01'

...are always great to read, and your characters are always realistic and well-portrayed. I'm looking forward to reading the next three parts!

I'm usually not into story's like this, but it drew me in. Keep up the great work.

I believe this was a great start. Keep it up, not too fast, just nice and steady.

A wonderful start. I to was not prepared for the build up. I can't wait for the next installment. I am now going back and checking if you have other stories that I can also read. Again its the beginning of a movie playing out in my mind.

Engrossed, couldn't stop reading.

Good character development. Realistic dialogue and settings. I have to wonder though if Emily is not intentionally enticing him (You go girl!). Of course he seems like a really nice guy and deserving of some happiness. Nicely done.

The words flow as the story developes. Well done and Thank You. Ronnie W.

your women are very sexy without being slutty

really nice. slow and perfect. thats exactly what i like.

I love how you don't jump right into it. Very nice and sexy! I'm off to read the next chapters.

The story is beautiful, I wish it had 40 chapters!

Too old to be called ma’am?