All Comments on 'The Trouble With Emily Ch. 02'

I went back and read ch.1 first and then read this one. The story is building nicely and I look forward to seeing if Mitch and Emily get together. The sex in this story is hot and emotional and I am enjoying the character building in both stories.

I enjoy the story prep and delivery. I'm just sorry that your note indicated that the following two would be shorter. I enjoy your style. Thanks

You've taken your time to properly develope the storyline. you've taken your time to flesh out the characters. Best of all the story flows smoothly along without dragging and gently brings the reader along and wanting more. Congratulations and Thank You. Ronnie W.

He doesn't sleep with the nymph because he needs an emotional connection, but then sleeps with the other lady a few hours after meeting her? Well written, but that part made no sense.

Very well done, nice build up and believable characters...

While the writing is good, I'm annoyed that you introduce all these extra girls (ie: Katie and Lizzie), and then don't let Mitchell go all the way with them. If you just want to concentrate on his relationship with Emily, then it would be better to not add more characters, as it takes the focus away from said relationship. I have the same problem with the Neighbor's Brat story as well.