All Comments on 'The Trouble With Emily Ch. 03'

I was highly enjoying your previous submissions,

and enjoyed this one as well.

Keep on your excellent work.

I look forward to your new stories.

With great appreciation,

White Bear.

Old Son:

As I re-read the story I realized that I had overlooked one of your great abilities, ie; to interject humor and pathos in just the right place and at the right time in each case. To be able to do that requires a mastery of the written word. Congratulations and Thank You. Ronnie W.

Really liked this story because you made it seem so real!

You ruined a beautiful romance in this chapter with all the bullsh.t.about bi's and guys kissing etc. Man, how disappointing to me. I'm, straight. Guess we should have some designation about bi stuff before we read because two guys together is just sickening to real men. Guess I won't read the next parts