All Comments on 'The Trouble with Henry Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lucky Henrietta

Absolutely great series. Great plot and script. Very envious of Henrietta. Would love to have been in her shoes/panties/etc!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

too bad there are not more stories like this

Lonewolf2013Lonewolf2013over 9 years ago
This is in the wrong Category.

This should be in the non-consent category, but I think the author wanted more people to read it so it was put here. Kind of a scam on the readers I feel, so I only gave each of the last chapters a rating of "1".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
a bad dream?

More like a nightmare. And since his body is covered in welts and bruises I think the Cops will agree that all the women need some prison time. And that's where they'd end up if you had finished this garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Too bad this did not continue and that the ending, rather than ambiguous, did not include a proper wrap up from the hero's perspective. There could have been some kind of epilogue where both of the main characters review what has happened. I hope the author continues writing.

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