All Comments on 'The Trouble with Henry Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Too bad this did not continue and that the ending, rather than ambiguous, did not include a proper wrap up from the hero's perspective. There could have been some kind of epilogue where both of the main characters review what has happened. I hope the author continues writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
a bad dream?

More like a nightmare. And since his body is covered in welts and bruises I think the Cops will agree that all the women need some prison time. And that's where they'd end up if you had finished this garbage.

Lonewolf2013Lonewolf2013over 9 years ago
This is in the wrong Category.

This should be in the non-consent category, but I think the author wanted more people to read it so it was put here. Kind of a scam on the readers I feel, so I only gave each of the last chapters a rating of "1".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

too bad there are not more stories like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lucky Henrietta

Absolutely great series. Great plot and script. Very envious of Henrietta. Would love to have been in her shoes/panties/etc!

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