All Comments on 'The Trouble With Tess Pt. 02'

Taking this away from a sibling romance to a slave scenario which I am not comfortable with but may endure if other parts of your story are enjoyable.

@ Frankie 1952 That’s fair enough. I am trying to find a balance between both as I write the story. But if it’s not to your tastes then I can at least thank you for attempting it :)

As always, amazing next chapter. Keep them coming!

Love it , I liked the first chapter and I liked this chapter. The personalities of the characters and the story that you have woven are of a master class.

Creative twist on a sibling relationship.

Good story.

Can't wait for more chapters

Another excellent read. I’m not quite into the slave stuff, but I still enjoy how you craft the story. Keep it up!

I don't know if I can wait for the next chapter. This is just Smoldering hot incest slave/master, sister/brother, love/sex. Please keep writing on this story..

I think Frankie 1952, is showing his age, from 1953 get over it, it's a Fantasy story. We all know "incest" is currently still Illegal, for the time being....

that was an amazing story, very well written, and loved every bit of if.

So a lovely second chapter, as I said before I’m not one for the whole Dom/Sub thing really as I prefer them being equals you know. That being said I don’t mean today’s version of that which is currently extremely wack; What I mean is the good old version husband/wife/partners who together build a life and live it.

Which honestly seems like what Tess wants, she wants to build a life with Matt and the reason behind her wanting to be a sub , in bed at least, is because she wants someone else to take control so she for once doesn’t have to, so she can just follow orders and do whatever is asked. I do think that with Matt around taking on the role of both brother and husband aka taking care of her, ensuring their lives are on track etc she will feel less needy towards being a sub and will want more to be a wife and partner to him.

Anyway long, rambling dissection of the story done. Good writing once again, nice development both with story and characters and again 5 stars from me. Can’t wait for chapter 3.

Premise is good, writing is good, and the sexual relationship is described well. The conflicting emotions were done well if a bit heavy. Great work and thanks for sharing this with us. 4.5/5

While this isn't a problem with the story the main character's sister is egocentric and self-absorbed. The main character's needs would never be factored into the sister's "world".

Now this is quality, not just a simple stroke.story. In fact, it would be (theoretically) possible to write this without any sex, although I wouldn’t rate it nearly as high. You’ve developed a wholly valid scenario, and written in a literate and compelling style. Thank you; well worth all five stars, more if they were available, and a place in my favourites.