All Comments on 'The Trust Me Pill Ch. 01'

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raguncajunraguncajunover 4 years ago

I hope she takes one and someone else gets control

Steve150177Steve150177over 4 years ago
Small continuity error

When they left the restaurant her cloths were in the trunk.

When she did the show for the trucker at the bottom of page 3 she had them back on.

FerrumitzalFerrumitzalover 2 years ago

Good work all around. Solid pacing and character development. I wouldn't say it was erotic, per se, but it was a good read that I hope sets up many more chapters.

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My stories generally explore what married life could be like for a couple who are committed to each other but want to explore more and enjoy some amount of risk. Plausibility is the general goal for the genres that permit it. Enjoy! (and please comment!) Questions, suggest...

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