All Comments on 'The Tunnel Builder Ch. 02'

This is a beautiful construct, and I love the story within the story - marvellous to see Polly and Cass develop their love, and fascinated by the unfolding tale. Another 5 stars from me.

Intriguing ;-)

You're certainly displaying versatility in your submissions, Monica, from the jolly fun of The Rising Star through to the downright weird and scary of The Third Daughter. And now you're telling a story of historical research and making it interesting. You really are proving to be an asset to this site.

I’m loving this story. It transports me to an EARLIER period of intrigue and scandal. ❤️

Oh this is wonderful. It is really drawing me in. I can't wait to see how it develops.

Technique is indeed everything Monica and you have it - in spades. This truly is a fascinating story which hopefully still has some way to go. Your attention to detail is admirable and is a joy to read. Plus we get to enjoy some particularly good sex scenes which I would like to think is inspired by personal experience.

Thanks for a intriguing story so far and look forward to many more .....

I am enjoying the story and the sex. Perhaps the story most of all. Can't wait to see where the next chapter takes it!

Erotica as it ought to be written. Fine writing, an interesting plotline, and an engaging, lively adult relationship. What more can a reader ask for?

LaVieQ

Oh WOW. You have captured the very essence of a murder mystery, an erotic love affair, the strong and powerful woman, who you could, if you so desired, write a whole series about.

This is a gem.

5 stars+