All Comments on 'The Turaround'

A great story - well done! Amy

Best version of this so far. Hah.

Great story. Loved the turnaround twist

5stars

he got what he asked for

Nice twist on a very old them. Well done!

Great twist on the tired old " indecent proposal" trope

Great twist on a topic that has been beat to death. Thanks... Slick742

Two twists - 1) Mark decided to take his if his wife was taking hers and 2) the cucking of William and the dominance of Jennifer was unexpected but well done. 5*

Good one ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Once you read the story, the twist is logical. Clever and original; well done.

Haha they had an open relationship. Clever

Loved it! Well edited as well.

Nice twist on a tired theme.

Thanks

Nice alternative storyline. Lacked some depth compared to others and the lead in a bit misleading (pun intended), but it worked. 4.4*

he lets his wife fuck other men

that means he is a cuck

Didn't miss a trick! Well done

A true cock and bull story. Hairy horseshit.

I don't know. Couldn't finish it.

Put that in your pipe and smoke it Robert Redford! 5*

Revenge and being made a fool of.

A story with a new twist and some humour. Very good 5+ stars.

awesome. love the turnaround. fresh take on a classic story line. thank YOU

Nice change up from the usual vein this line takes.

Most authors manage to spell the story title correctly. I took your advice in the first paragraph and moved on.

Love burning the bastard but stupid slut Lucy is about to become a cuck queen for hubby and Jennifer.

Loved it! Big smiles for the never saw it coming turn about. The only "open marriage" story I have ever enjoyed.

LOL. Yes, great twist. The story followed a tried path until suddenly... LOL. I was wondering what was going to be different. Nicely adapted, Thank You. Cheers.

What ruined this one is the revelation that they already allowed each other to fuck around, which massively devalued the fake angst the reader thought hubby was going thru.

.

2 **

Didn’t care for it. 2*

Not sure. I thought for sure the M/C would blow up, just not like that. 3 stars, the Bear liked the sex, but the rest?? Not sure.

The BEAR

Good turn on similar plotlines

Great fun storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very enjoyable. D

10 stars for the writer and the "Great Turn About" with this unique twist on this trope of "rich guy Island" to seduce the hot wife and turn hubby into A cuck. This was an amazing read. Just the opposite of what was expected! Thank You for the Great Writing, Great Twist, and Great Effort. Excellent Twist. Thanks Buster2U

Love it

like the twist but was more fetish than LW for me.

Interesting rewrite of the original stories.

It always amazes me how Fucking rude some of these comments are. Here we have a "Free" website with almost all fantasies covered and we get a constant stream of assholes being rude and acting like they are a Harvard professor and know everything. Yet they almost always comment these rude remarks under "anonymous" LOL

I liked it immensely, a prick of a ceo got his comeuppance and Lucy and Mark took over completely. Full marks from ne

Nope

Nice!!!!

LOL funny!

Very clever. Well done.

Very nice BTB with a neat original twist! He who digs a hole for others, can't complain about falling into that hole himself.

/

Pity there was no fallout to the evil sluts who participated before and set the couple up for the potential devastation, but one can't have everything. 5 stars.

@wavedave45: They didn’t have an open relationship. They are together in full trust and unity. There are no secrets between them and they put each other first. This is the foundation of a strong marriage. They may play with others, but none come between them. Open relationships are when selfish people look for something outside. This couple sometimes let others in for a while. Intent and motivation make all the difference.

Well written and an original spin on this theme. I couldn't give it higher marks due to not being thrilled w/ the whole open marriage thing, but that is my quibble, not a reflection on the story-teller.

Lame

You turned that tired, worn-out, beaten-up storyline on its head, pile-driven into the mat, and slung it over the top rope into the ringside seats! Niiiiiiiice! 100/100!!!!11

-Yossarian

Good twist on the old indecent proposal cliche.

I liked how they made the rich guy their cuckold, then proceeded to destroy his marriage.

5* for novelty value.

Not sure about this other than to say, at least the husband wasn't blindsided! The fact that the domineering businessman trying to buy sex from a married woman got thwarted was a definite plus. I typically hate that storyline when it is used in the typical fashion. The only real negative was the bondage thread through the last part of the story.

When I realized this was going to be an indecent proposal story I primarily had a vision of Mark being dead set against it. But when triple ganged and pressured by William, Jennifer, and Lucy I saw Mark negotiating for his best deal, including a lot more money out of William and having it wired to a personal account. Next, Mark would take Jennifer for the time coming to him and essentially turn her inside out, using, abusing and ruining her for William or ANY other man. Lucy on the other hand would have a lackluster experience bordering on sexual boredom. Next the weekend would come to a close and everyone would be together at lunch before departure. After eating and toasting the hosts, and in front of everyone else, Mark would take Lucy's rings from her and drop his into her champagne glass. Thus, signaling the end of their marriage.

I like the way you ended it better!

Bravo

Well done

Seems more like a BDSM/Non-Con thing to me. Not what I want to read in the LW section. Sorry.

I can’t “except” this as one of your better efforts. The bondage, switch hitting, and group sex are out of place.

THIS is where the turaround happens:

'I turned to speak to the group, "I gather this weekend has been in the planning for some time and you all knew, so it seems fair you all hear what I have to say."

I'm... mixed.

I like it, but it doesn't come together for me. I'll give it another read before I rate it. It's an interesting flip, but somehow...

-

Be well!

I liked the twist. I never trust any reviews by someone who refers to themselves in the third person

"Oh there are a number of reasons: William will offer you a financial incentive whilst Lucy will enjoy a one off experience."

Lol wow she just called his wife a whore. But I mean her job title is at best mean company escort at worse company whore. Cool story and I know u said it to take it too seriously but the only way it works is if the Mc and wife just met. As most of this theme stories

I thought this was cleverly done. I was irritated at first with the possible cuck husband, but actually this is an example of a good marriage. They communicated from the off and turned the table on everyone. They also still made it clear they there has to be consent from everyone. Well done

I haven't read the story yet but will do so. In your preface, you say you spell heck and proofread. You should do the same with the title. 😀

JPB

Three stars, for an Average story. Not particularly well developed, and not very believable. Writing was decent, though.

JPB

Great turnabout on a really tired meme.

5 stars

So you get stuck on an island with no way to get off. What do you do? You're forced to accept what happens? What if you shoot the SOB? Then you would have a better story, especially if you didn't call the police.

Hmmmm.... Not sure what to think. Nice twist but lacking iin substance

Neat twist to old story !

another option... kill him, feed him to the sharks, let good old mother nature take the hit. Silly, but better than whatever I just read.

A variation to a tired trope, nothing really new.

3/5

@Anonymous

RE: @wavedave45: They didn’t have an open relationship.

"The thing is we have an open relationship and may have consented to time with William and Jennifer, but the £100k is a lovely bonus."

You should try READING rather than SKIMMING.

nice twist on a tired theme

Thanks for your writing.

Fun. Unexpected, for me anyway. Started as the standard loving wives boss retreat and took a fun left turn.

Thanks!

" ...there's always someone with more money, a harder punch, greater clout or a bigger cock."

.

Or, as we say in Texas, "Ain't never been a horse that couldn't be rode, ain't never been a man that couldn't be throwed."