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Anonymousalmost 4 years agoYou lost me in the third paragraph
Make up your mind between 2nd and 3rd person!
If I hadn't, I would've never met Vanessa ...
And you lived close by ...
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoTedious
Hard to read...mixed persons and shaky grammar. Just a tedious read.
TheKrrakalmost 4 years agoDescription needs adjusting
The description of this was - "Single dad meets a sexy young female tutor.", however he talks about his wife in the tale - which is it?!?
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoWhat happened to the single dad?
You are all over the place. Really distracting
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