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WindySwimmingWindySwimmingover 8 years ago
Lookin' Good!

Well done, CP!! Of course I'm biased, but your content just shines through after what little tweaking I did in proofreading. Some readers may be uncomfortable with pegging, but it gave a fun twist in the denouement for this flash story. Perhaps there are roles in future stories for this strong female character who's adept at humbling a young, bragging and arrogant bloke.

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