All Comments on 'The Twelve Zenati Pt. 35'

Outstanding Ellie, it just gets better and better. Thanks for sharing your wonderful yarn

Love how this is building. Another great chapter. Thank you.

Bank you for your writing and the story. It does just keep getting more complex and wonderful

Beautiful chapter. Loved every thing about it, accents and all. No issue with Marcella or Noah for that matter and it’s not because I’m becoming soft in my dotage, I just found both of them being fun and honest.

Thank you again for sharing this with us.

Love it love it love it

Brilliant! The accents bring it vividly into life. I’m a huge fan of your writing thank you so much for sharing this.

Tess (uk)

I'm so glad that you are writing and posting again. You weave a wonderful yarn!

I am glad to see you writing again. Well done... thank you for sharing your time and talent!

Love, love, love the Aussie references!

You 'sow' dissent like you sow seeds. You 'sew' your torn trousers. This solecism aside the story is practically perfect in every way. Love it.