All Comments on 'The Twins'

FUCKING YUK!!!

AWESOME story.

Please Can’t wait to see where you take the story.

Nick is one lucky guy! Would like to see him continue a sexual relationship with Macy and Marcy! Would also like to see Macy and Marcy intimate with another set of hot twins and they invite Nick to join in!

They both sound like lovely, hot young ladies! What a fantastic story.... I could find nothing wrong with the story itself, but there were a few tiny grammatical errors (which didn't impact the story in any way, really), but that's only a problem for someone who's hyper-critical (I'm not, unless I am asked to be).

Great writing, great story- definitely one of the hotter jerk-off pieces I've read in a long while.

Tackling "Everyman's Fantasy" takes guts. To do a good job with it takes talent.

hope to see more adventures of the twins.

One of the hottest stories i've read in a long time, cant wait for part 2