All Comments on 'The Twins'

Well done!

Of all the erotic fiction I've read so far, THIS was hands-down the best story to date!

You just did such an absolutely perfect job with the impregnation fetish here, not to mention that you are the first author I've read to also get the whole panties fetish right.

5/5 STARS!

PS: As my way of saying Thank You, here is what I imagine the twins Sophia & Jennifer look like in real life: https://youtu.be/qkbsHPz2O14

Somehow I am drawn to twins stories. Of the many I have read, this is the best. Or if not, one of the best. I appreciated the cooperation and lack of jealousy between sisters.

A possible addition could have been Curt giving an identical ring to Jennifer. Then, in an unofficial ceremony between the three, Jennifer and Curt become husband and wife, with the "marriage document" showing that Sophia is in agreement. If any of Sophia and Jennifer's family were amenable, this ceremony could involve more than the three (possibly their grandkid-wanting mom and/or their other sisters?). If this ceremony came before Curt and Sophia's official ceremony, it would give the unofficial wife the added stature of being his first "wife."

Thanks for the interesting read.

Paul in Oklahoma

impregnation risk sex is the best

What a lucky guy, 2 sex slaves for the price of marring Sophia, now how to explain Jennifer's pregnancy to his folks. Well done 5 stars

Great story, would have been nice if you bought rings for both of them though.

Would have been nice if he bought rings for both, even if the second one was symbolic

Where is the next part man.

I loved it. Though I feel he should have an identical ring for Jennifer too.

But do write another part. It can be about their mother in law also getting pregnant along with the 2 daughters.

Not my fet but still a fun story.

I just think a pity both bald...nothing sexier than a lush ebony bush to match the hair on their heads...had a PR girlfriend back on college that LOVED shtupping and I loved her muffin

Absolutely delightful. My only critique is that I had hoped there would have been a bit at the end about how horny the two got while they're pregnant, and then hinting as around how many kids they were thinking about having after they gave birth.

Regardless, an absolute delight of a story.

Hawt und Zexy!

11/10!!!!!

What a Great Story! The BEST Knock-Up story I have ever read. Thanx for the Great Read. I'm going to follow your other stories now, and have Great Expectations!

Very enjoyable and very entertaining. I loved the BBQ sex scene, very hot and unforgettable. What a wonderful fantasy, thanks for sharing.

I know this is just a story, but I can't help feeling jealous of this guy for having two hot and horny sisters who don't mind sharing him.

Great story, 5-stars.

Identical dark-haired latina twins ,,,just KNOW they'd have lush ebony muffins if only they didn't each shave themselves bald/smooth...

Super fun story. I wish it had a bit more meat to it, more teasing and build up in the beginning Michael and Sophia, and then bringing in Jennifer. The story starts with them just knowing they want him to knock them up, and him seemingly perfectly fine with it even though he hardly knew them. Like I said, the story is super fun, but I feel it could have been so much deeper and satisfying. The family get together was the sexiest part, and I wish there was more.

Mike's other wife

The mystique of twins is a cultural fascinations. Twins run in families often skipping generations. Sometimes first cousins will produce a run of twins.

But the big question is how do you tell twins apart? Michael cannot provide an answer. Though he ipregnates both twins, he offers the ring to Sophia. Why was she selected?

The story doesn't seem to answer the question.

ONE MAN AND TWINS INTERESTING CONCEPT

Rock brings a wrinkle on the modern concept of marriage. While there has been a breakdown of the concept of marriage as an association between two people of opposite sexes for reproduction, ROCK introduces a different conception, a reproductive relationship of one man with twins. While there were those of subcultures which practised polygamy, ROCK has postulated a relationship between twins. The offspring would be more than cousins, they'd be siblings. If conception was relatively contemporaneous, could not the result be twins.

A delicious tale. Why not 'marry' both of the twins?