All Comments on 'The Twins'

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IvarHakuseIvarHakuseover 1 year ago

The double cowgirl bit at the end could have been explored more rather than encountering the strap on, which was a let down for me!

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGabout 1 year ago

This is a four star story...the premise is really good, it just dragged along a little too much...😢 Not that I did not like it, I did...just something 'lacking' somewhere...but I cannot put my finger on it, exactly!!

Still, rather nice; the twins are excellent companions, and a lot of fun...too bad they married the "boxing brothers"

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