All Comments on 'The Twins Ch. 05'

That was good! Thanks.

Getting a little bizarre for me. I'm glad you at least touched (too lightly) that Allie cheated on Alex and possible dynamics with that situation. I see you're now going down the male obsession of being with two women as overcoming the loving relationship that he Alex and Allie supposedly had. At some point, the relationship discussion will have to come down to who's first, Alex or Carly? You do have some interesting subplots going with "mom" but we'll see. Good overall but the plot is starting to fray - 4*

Omg I want to sex it up with two gorgeous cunts like this. So steaming hot.

This chapter sucked, because it is NOT incest/taboo if the sister and Carly are having so-called "sex", and it does not include the brother!

The novella is called "Twins."

And in the beginning it was a story about twins and their feelings. Things change from there.

The author seems to have decided to exclude Alex from the active characters. He's destined to be

the role of "living dildo" on demand and covering up family secrets. I think it's a

a great tragedy for him, leading to moral degradation, psychological

trauma and even death.

Alex needs to take matters into his own hands, to be a leader, not a follower. Become an Alpha.

Then his relationship with his sister, his sister and her roommate, or just

with his roommate has a chance to live and grow.

Ellie doesn't understand this yet because of her age, and her mother and aunt only think about lust.

The father is not an example.

Alex's death, moral or physical, will also be a tragedy for Ellis.

S&M fantasies with her father are unclear at all.