All Comments on 'The Twins Ch. 08'

If that's it after those last two chapters then what really was the point? After two attempted assaults you have her raped. Im not seeing any real need for all that. You youve have been better off with a different story dealing with her rape and recovery over 8 chapters then what you built up to.

After reading this I thing it would have been best if you just let it be after chapter 8, you were tormenting the characters (and us) for long enough already. This chapter does the bare minimum of fixing things and actually leaves more questions than it does answers to the whole debacle and inner struggle. The best thing to (hopefully) come out of this is you getting some memos on how to write a story and doing better the next time.

Sadly couldn't give it more than 1*.

This ending is good that Jack & Rach are reconciling but I reckon we need to know they make love and how good it is for them. I also want to know what their future as a couple is. Do they break it to the parents or get caught? Please tidy up thos loose ends.

Despite all the criticism this has been a good read. A few things to cause some angst in a relationship can be quite normal. It isn't like she willingly cheated on him.

Such amazing writing!

Loved the series, please write more chapters!!

I liked this story but like others I was disappointed with the way it went in the previous chapter. Unlike others I didn't comment on it I wanted to see how the story progressed before commenting.

This chapter has recovered the story and I am glad that Racheal and Jack have found each other again, The previous chapter was emotionally difficult to read and this one carried forward the tension in the story.

I hope the next chapter, if there is one, resolves their relationship and brings it to a happy conclusion.

The Love of this story has vanished. If you loved some one my point is don't give a shit to sex with others.

This was a wonderful, incomplete series! I feel strongly you need at least one chapter and an epilog to tie up all the loose ends! I agree all really good love stories need lows and highs! I feel you have done well there, but the James character and what he did has to be answered, as well as a glimpse at their future to ease everyone's imagination. I know some authors like to end with things uncertain and let the reader imagine their own ending, but I feel it is a cop out! This 8 chapters of wonderfulness deserves an ending! GO! Get writing! We NEED THIS, and so do you. Show us your vision of them which I know you have locked away! SHOW US!

Fucking figure out how to spell!