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All Comments on 'The Twins Weave Book 02 Ch. 03'

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mharrisonmharrisonalmost 2 years ago

I know you've stated that this is written in an odd first person style but even bearing that in mind I'm occasionally finding the flow of the dialogue a bit hard to follow. Having said that it's still a great story. Liked how you used the characters from the "path of the necromancer" story (shame that was never continued).

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