by SweetVibes
Very hot story. If I were in a similar situation, I like to think that my big head would do the thinking, but if the babe was hot enough, I'd probably do just like you did. Great story - well written and erotic.
The idea of two men swapping places like that without her noticing is just about the most ridiculous device imaginable.
And too nasty to be a good story.
Sorry, decent enough writing, but I really felt like I needed a cleansing shower after reading it.
Since he's clearly a moron, he'd be too dumb to hang onto a 40+ year old fox. When you got a woman like that you gotta be on guard 25 hours a day, 8 days a week. I like the concept of this, but not the execution. Not voting but it's enough to say this story deserves it's rating.
This is probably the fifth story of yours that I have read and they keep getting better. Very well written, realistic and you do a great job of building up to the end without it having to be 10 plus pages. Great job!