by SweetVibes
This is probably the fifth story of yours that I have read and they keep getting better. Very well written, realistic and you do a great job of building up to the end without it having to be 10 plus pages. Great job!
Since he's clearly a moron, he'd be too dumb to hang onto a 40+ year old fox. When you got a woman like that you gotta be on guard 25 hours a day, 8 days a week. I like the concept of this, but not the execution. Not voting but it's enough to say this story deserves it's rating.
The idea of two men swapping places like that without her noticing is just about the most ridiculous device imaginable.
And too nasty to be a good story.
Sorry, decent enough writing, but I really felt like I needed a cleansing shower after reading it.
Very hot story. If I were in a similar situation, I like to think that my big head would do the thinking, but if the babe was hot enough, I'd probably do just like you did. Great story - well written and erotic.