by newbie2008
Terrible way to end it, and there probably should not have been a part 2 because all it seems to have done is make the characters really unlikable.
My wife and I read this story and her question was “ do women really do this “ I answered yes. There are women that would do that. Have you thought about it, would you even consider it?? Her reply was, she would have to be blacked out drunk so what’s the point. To this day all it’s ever been is talk and fantasy when having sex. She did want to know when the next story about Janet was coming ( no pun intended ) out?
Loved the first part more, whenever there is too much sharing, with the men having any role in her life, its gets less interesting. over sharing spoils it for me. But maybe she doing things secretly behind her husbands back would have raised the kink factor. But still 5 stars for your effort
The Nurse hid her disgust behind the professional mask she'd acquired since working for this rather unique medical practice. "Ma'am, the good news is that of your six STIs, all are treatable and can be cleared up within five, maybe six months. The bad news is that your sex life is out the window until you're cured, and the worse news is that there's now a 90% chance you're now sterile." As she walked away, Nurse Ratchet felt guilty that besides the small bit of sympathy she could muster for this woman, she felt greatly relieved that she'd likely not bring a child into her broken, dysfunctional family.
It's insane that any fertile woman would play the random guy insemination game. Yeah, maybe Henry, because he's a known quantity, and she'd have a great claim to make on his paternity. But randomly? That doesn't even comport with believable fiction, much less reality.
A whole new level? It’s been years since the last chapter, but if you’ve still any interest in writing, would love to read about those continued adventures. Does Janet really have she with Henry three times a day, do they continue to experiment and add several more men to those ejaculating inside Janet? Does she suck several men off and swallow their cum? Does Janet experience enough sex with Henry and other men that she and hubby manage to get it out of their system so they can move on to a more ‘normal’ lifestyle or do they become so enamored of Janet indulging in new sexual experiences with other men that ‘normal’ for them means the hotwife lifestyle?
Great story! I was turned on the whole time reading this. I often feel the same way as he does, wanting to see another mans cock going in and out of her without a condom on (skin on skin) and see her inseminated. What an erotic rush that would be for me. I’ve told her my fantasies about watching suck and fuck another man, but so far it remains a fantasy. Too bad, I feel she’d love being fucked by another man (and don’t tell me all wives don’t think about it) maybe one day I’ll be just as lucky as this guy was 🤞🏻
Wish I had come across these sooner. Shame the author stopped, I thought this series had wheels. I liked the downward spiral of depravity as that is generally the way these things go.
Enjoyed both parts and hope there will be a third. Maybe this time she got knocked up.
Basically a rape fantasy by the husband. In real life, she divorces him asap. Not cool.
Awesome story, it is an amazing story. Some of the story hit home. I understand the guilt part for watching and yet we do it again. Well done.
But you need to finish it, have you stopped writing. I sincerely hope not, yours are some of the best stories I've read. So get it in gear, and make me a happy man.
I know we were drinking more than normal but that is not an excuse for my wife to let 4 guy gang bang her. I was cleaning up outside on our patio and when I was done I couldn't find her. Then I heard something in the basement. I went outside and looked through a window there she was with 4 men who I had thought were my friends. I knew that my marriage was over so I just thought their spouse's should know what was going on. I sent pictures to 3 of the spouse's and asked if they could let the other know. I had put my phone on silent and it lit up and I invited them all over. I had put a prop up against the door so it would hopefully keep them in the basement till they all arrived. You talk about a riot one of the women brought a tire bat. I advised her not to take it to the basement. She said don't try to stop her. I kind of felt sorry for her husband but then I did laugh. 3 of the 4 divorced. The other seeperated. Then when our divorce was over 3 of the women were trying their best to get with me.I agreed to date them but only date like a meal movie and dancing I wasn't interested in getting serious with anyone for a while I had trust issues because of the one and only woman I loved cheated on me.
Disgusting that is basically rape you idiot. She was drunk and half passed out and you think this scenario is ok? Good thing its fantasy because in real life your wife would have left your ass for good You are seriously messed up and so is this shit story.
What was a very good story is starting to get a bit more twisted, not sure if it’s the way I,d like it to go
The story fell apart with the mystery last man to have her. My first thought is that it was Henry, but who knows. JEF
Now that I am invested in the characters there are several ways that this can move forward? As of now she amazingly has only been fucked in two of her pussies, or was her virgin butt pussy taken?
I also think for her this can not be over, but that he no longer controls what happens .. perhaps he will stay a husband in name only with other duties or not?
I am disappointed that there was no Part 3
A great story, and one that I can relate to in a number of ways.
Okay, it’s been nearly a dozen years since Chapter 2, but if you’re at all interested in doing any more writing it would be SO fun to read about that next sexual level you referred to that took place over the next week or so of their cruise. Yeah, they were totally dumb and careless, but they’re young enough to sow their wild oats, grow up and get serious. All these stories are is a combo of words, ideas, and feelings. As long as nothing truly nefarious happened to your intrepid cruisers, why not let it all hang out.
Wow, if this story is actually true you are deeply twisted, sick, and completely stupid idiot. Henry, fine, but everything after that is just wrong, you you basically forced her, raped her with every guy. Not a cool story or way to live.
What a toxic, unhealthy, unbelievably bad story. What is redeeming about this train wreck on any level? and of course continuing such destructive behavior for the sake of achieving "an entirely new sexual level" makes it all ok. Come on- even fiction has to have some connection to realism. This is just an insane adolescent jerk off fantasy with no consideration of the disaster to come.
If MrNumbers liked it, then it has to be really nasty, and then BobNBoobi spits out the cock in his mouth to make a stupid comment. Every cuck who reads LW liked this shit, so brain damage is endemic here
Next installment, they visit Fort Hood, Texas where she 'hangs out' with the First Cavalry Division!
Beautiful! All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.
The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.
Women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly
great story. very well written 5 stars!! Now this is not my cup of tea. I will never understand why a guy who loves his wife has a fantasy of her fucking other men. I do not know were this story is going but I feel that these two have ruined their relationship and will soon divorce. There is no recovery from this kind of behavior. Janet will most probably end up pregnant. It is a sad story, really! She does these other guys to please her husband but she loves doing them as well. He gets hard watching her. They are both really fucked up people.
Liked it lots. Maybe more action with Henry before the boys on the beach? Liked the beach fun with the boys and that she was with the big black guy when he found her!
better than wacthing pornhub...blow my mind...I hope there is next story about this couple...interisting see where the couple take the relationship when they back to new normal life
Very good story, a bit confusing at times on timeline but the storyline provides for many more options. Its been a few years, now 2020, so you have had time to ponder.
The whole storyline really appealed to me.
1 * because once more you have promised more and failed to deliver nothing worse than an unfinished tale. Stupid thing is, the story could have been wound up without much effort.
the only thing about this story ,that she did not suck henry cock off
and lots of errors. In one part you fuck in front of Henry, but then its the next day and the chronology is all wrong. And what happened next, that was never written.
Should of been in the "Fetish", "Voyeur", or maybe "cuckold".
Such a tease! Please continue the story and provide the details of what happened that next week that took them to the mentioned, "entirely new sexual level". Janet is obviously discovering a lot about her sexuality and is eager to immerse herself in it. John seems happy to help her do so. So... let's get at it!!
What I like most is Janet’s journey from following her husband’s prompts to leading him so she can fulfill her new found cravings... That is all pretty hot but after all the character development and history I’ve grown attached to the characters and I’m truthfully a bit disappointed with the couple being so irresponsible. It’s very distracting. Sure risk adds some spice (passion &need) but this couple is literally trying to get her pregnant and them both diseased. Not trying to be a buzz kill because I like the story but they shouldn’t be spreading disease everywhere they go...
have read your stories a few times. love this one. should be a part 3. pleaseesssssss
I loved the story, please write a part 3 sweetie, Tina
This cuck risked his wife getting STD's and infecting himself and maybe Henry. the condom of Henry's he stuffed up her vagina was pretty safe as the sperm had not been kept in ideal conditions, all the little wigglers would be dead. they should have taken more care and used condoms apart from Henry who should have avoided the 9th to the 11th days of her ovulation cycle. As I said before the husband needed his brains examining as they are in his cock end.
they went down to the dingy and let everybody and their brother fuck her. Way out of character for them both. Just not believable ! The writing was really good before the gang bang. Gave it a 4, would have easily been a 5 before you made her a whore!
Know when to quit !
Terrific story! Really erotically charged...deliciously depraved!
this guy is sick with a capital S. If I was his wife I would leave him.
I don't get the whole fascination with flooding the cervix and uterus and getting her pregnant. Is that a turn on? Is it because it's a taboo? I think I'd have enjoyed it more with out that element.
It's a fantasy, I just don't understand why you need to emphasize the danger and bad possibilities.
Poor Henry, you didn't let him play too. Love old men with huge cocks. Part Three maybe.
I really did enjoy the story but the beach scene was a bit much . I was hopeing for the rest of the trip to be Henry enjoying Janet as well as her husband . I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story . I do think she protested to much after enjoying Henry so much . Clearly she wanted Henry as much as her husband wanted to watch . The bit about the condom was VERY different and quite kinky .
I thought the story was great for the person who said they read the whole thing in disgust you could've stopped at anytime it's just fantasy/fiction it doesn't mean the author actually condones the behavior irl don't hate on someone else's art if u don't like it just move on but to call someone out for erotic story on a site like literotica is kinda ridiculous lol keep up the good work newbie2008 I look forward to many a night with your writing
All our worlds need a shove every now and then, because we get into a routine, rut or whatever and we need to find an excuse to do something totally uncharacteristic. This is one of those half finished stories that leaves one wanting more. How about it?
After enough women have left you suicide seems like a good idea.
I read the entire thing! You did an awesome job with this story. It was very erotic. Thank you for writing it.
Texas Pilot
I read the whole thing in disgust! I kept hoping that somewhere along the way one or both of them would wise up, but NO....The character, John, is one screwed up asshole, so I suspect that you are too, writing this kind of bull shit! You are one fucked up asshole!!
Can't find any story better when it describes being drunk, erotic thoughts and chance of becoming a mom. This chapter deserves a five star rate, as did the previous chapter.
Intelligent interaction of emotions. And I like that they have real love and concern for each other!
I would like to see your wife sucking off all old men would be real nice.
Think about it next time you write.
Men from the bottom end of the fish tank.
Would be hot!!! Gotta love it!!
Unlike the detractors and haters, I love your writing style. I don't know if you intended to leave this thread hanging or....? I would love to see what happens with the couple in the future, as I am certain others would also.
This ending would have been better if she sucked off the guys on the beach and then went back to the hotel room to fuck both her husband and the huge cock. The thought of endless lines of nameless faceless mexican emptying their loads in her pussy is out of character with the rest of the story.
If there is more to this story I would love to read it!
CarnalProdigy@gmail.com
fantasy or not this is a very sad story...This man had no respect or love for his wife!!! What kind a man do those things to the woman he loves? He should be sent to an asylum...
In as much as this is/was a fantasy I can actually see something like this happening. But I have to agree with one other comment, that this, was all actually a desire of the guys wife and she had knew just how to manipulate her stupid husband to get what she really wanted. But all in all not a bad story.
I love your stories - keep them coming and disregard the haters.
Even for fiction this was poorly conceived and badly written. You never convince me that the husband wants this. It feels like a slut wife satisfying her own carnal desires without regards, really, to her husband. Could she possible show him less love or respect than she does? Just awful.
I still like the premise of the story, as do probably MANY other readers. It does need some conclusion.......
I'd love to see my wife fucked by five guys too but I think she'd like to suck the come out of them as well. She loves to have come in her mouth and then let it all drip out and down her chin and neck. She says she likes the sensation as the hot come rolls across her skin.
EXCELLENT. I ALSO LIKED NEW YEARS RISK AND REWARD,
Please write more. You're a very very good writer. I'm addicted I your story. I should be sleeping as it's almost morning now but I can't.
I loved the story and the way it was told. I hope you write the next chapter soon.
I am very impressed with your writing. You are a great story teller. Your ability to capture the right pace for erotic build-up is exceptional. Waiting for for the next chapter.
You started with a seemingly 'normal' story but created a very,, very hot and exciting one. Don;t abandon this! This is too good not to be a long and very involved story.
I read a lot and I think you are one of the best. I wish you write more. Thanks a lot.
By a group of niggers, and now she's gona have a nigger baby. She got drunk one night at a party and this is what happened to her. I hope to god she don't have an STP. I don't want to lose her, but I don't want to get the dose either. What do I do now?
...she gets fucked an he watches...poor sucker
And when you get it, divorce is the answer. Dummy.
it seems that after a good story premise is established (hubby, the wife and henry) you tried to see how far and how fast you could take it away from that premise - it would have been good to develope further the relationship, and where it went after wifey got knocked up by henry - leave the gang bangs out of it
It was a very good story. Hot as hell. My one disappointment was that she didn't suck off at least some the guys on the beach, if not all of them. Some of them would had the stamina and desire to fuck your wonderfully very hot wife after she sucked them off. Also it would have been better had she admitted to sucked off and fucked two guys at the end when you fail asleep. She claimed, and she may have been right as far as you knew, that you had agreed to her sucking and fucking them before she did it. That would made the story hotter still.
All of that said, it still was a great effort on your part. Keep writing.
I really like your stories, particularly the slow build-up. I must say that your female characters are more believable. Retrieving a used condom from the garbage and stuffing it into your wife's vagina? I don't think many of your male readers have that particular fantasy. Regardless I do enjoy reading your stories and wanted more. This story deserves to be continued and your Latin wife story (chapters 1-8 of 23) is a real teaser. So I went across to the site you mentioned in your biography and searched for your name. I was disappointed that the rest of the Latin wife story wasn't there. All the stories seem to have already been posted on Literotica but "New Years Risk and Reward" was a free download so I decided to sign up and check it out. It turned out that this has an extended ending to that posted on literotica so I decided to pay my money and download "Fantasy in Paradise". What a rip-off. This is completely identical to "The Unaffordable Vacation". Definitely a better title though.
Clearly this story took a turn for the worse when they went to the beach . Giving the guys blow jobs while hubby watched and or fingered her would have been better . Five loads on her face , tits and in her mouth would have been very sexy . Still , the beach scene was hot as hell and i look forward to reading the next chapter in this series .
I think a return to just the three of them with Henry getting some much needed oral sex and maybe them double penetrating her also . She is still dealing with society teaching women this is slutty while men are free to screw anything that has a hearbeat . Lets see where it all leads .
Sandman
Not as good as part 1 unfortunately. I enjoyed the build-up towards henry and would have hoped it would involve him more than some anonymous guys.
split roast her send her documents in his case both should ingest large quantity of rat poison and rid the world of two liberals.