All Comments on 'The Underclassman Ch. 01'

Excellent start - definitely deserves further exploration!! Write on!

Mainly, B. S.

fun start!

While the start sounds fake, it actually happens. A family friend's name was Donalda, she was put in the men's dorms at University thinking her name was Donald A.

Great start!

Good premise. Looking forward to development.

Don't trust dictation apps or SpellCheck or AutoCorrect. E.g., "threw" versus "through": "Mick felt the first shot course threw his cock and into Brenda's mouth as his pelvis began to spasm." Really?

First story, great start and the grammar police are triggered! Sounds like a winner to me! I'm a late comer so I have some catching up to do.

Cheers

SAGE

I'm a year behind also, but just as excited as Mick about getting to the next evening's party. Hope he doesn't forget to get both alcohol and condoms.

Good start

Nice premise.

But sex is too mechanical. Too automatic.

No tension. No real foreplay. No teasing. No edging. No involvement with any of her body parts.

No breasts. No ass. No nipples -- or even discussions about them,

Two stars.