All Comments on 'The Unexpected'

No. Totally unbelievable. Why? Come on, 'auto-correct' would've effed up at least a third of the words.

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Seriously, I give you high marks for originality, but there was no frisson, no emotion. Nice try, but it felt empty. 3/5.

Almost impossible to follow this at all; very confusing and difficult to read.

Good is right.

This was horribly written, disjointed and less of a story and more of a blurry half remembered events of a week long bender.

To be continued? Really? This challanges the limits of stupidity! Minus ********

stupid, I hope he gives her a gangbang and they dump her in the river

boring

Doesn't need another chapter. End it now

Where does this take place? Mars? to be continued? Really? 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Could this happen in real life ? Probably as there has to be some guy out there stupid enough to get himself into this situation. Think my last text to “Dave or wife” , Hall pass has been revoked at this time it is cheating and no need to return . Where do I send divorce papers ? And Dave , keep the slut as I have no need for her any longer… Good luck.

It took you fifteen years to write a story and this is what you came up with?

Great start with Cuck story. You will fit right in with rest of degenerates who write same shit as you!

Keep them cumming (not a spelling error)!

difficult to read.

Why is this couple married? If she can go off with a stranger without consulting her cuck then that is cheating. But hey cucks like that type of thing you know being belittled and humiliated and disrespected thats what gets these cucks off.

Cuck shit, should be in Fetish, not here

Scores 1/5

I guess the reader is supposed to get all emotional for the guy, but it’s not happening. From the panties, to getting drunk before he got there, to making him sit in the corner after he did get there, to openly cheating with another guy in public, to letting the other guy use her phone to message him, to leaving with the other guy - the whole night was disrespectful. I’m happy for the MC. He can now go find a decent woman to involve in his life. Good riddance to the skank.

as I do not live on my phone, I cannot give an unbiased opinion of this garbage. This is not a "story" but ramblings between people who most likely cannot hold a simple conversation in person.

Too easy

Even the convenient name-drop of the forgotten hall pass can't save this situation. The marriage may or may not survive, but getting past the numerous slights and mis-steps will be daunting. And not just him; she's drunk, so not making best decisions.

Degenerate minds write degenerate crap. 1 star because we can't give less. This is just a wife choosing to cheat on her husband and rub his nose in it with her ability to take advantage of the relationship. There is no "loving wife" in this story. A weak non-man who fails to earn his Man Club card. Readers who enjoy these type of stories must also be non-men. Why else do they revel in this cuckold genre?

Another retread writer who cant tell even a remotely decent story and throw in some seriously pathetic cuck drivel, and this was horribly fucking stupid, and you get the literary version of Jock itch.

Husband sound like a pathetic loser. Are all cuckolds like this?

Why do women put up with them? Security perhaps? Lame.

Hasn't anyone heard of fiction?

You all act as though this your only friends. It is just a made up story. Get over it!

The tags clearly state what will be happening, and you read it anyway. Just so you could do your childish acts of belittling and name calling. Congratulations.

If we don't keep telling the cuck idiots that they are cuck idiots, then they'll still believe that what they are is normal. So we will continue to act as we do. And where better than where we can find the cuck idiots, on their own ground !! And as the comments of some readers show, we are on the right track!

It is pathetic to see people harrassing authors to not write about cuckolding. I do not think there are many of them. They just keep writing messages as if were diffrent people. Perhaps is only one with nothing better to do. Grofofporn, keep with the good job and ignore these people/person.