All Comments on 'The Unforgettable Road Trip Pt. 01'
by Generalgums
- 8 Comments
Anonymousabout 4 years agoA really enjoyable story, well structured and nicely written.
yobythguanabout 4 years agoI can't wait for Part 2! What really would have put it even over the top kink-wise would have been if, while Veronica was in the tent with Ria and moaning the way she was, if Pat and Mike could have felt so turned on and so caught up in the depravity that they would pleasure one another orally. Just a thought from my dirty mind!
goducks111about 4 years agoyou're one of the better writers on this site. clever, sexy, well-written story. can't wait for more. 5 stars
Anonymousabout 4 years agoLoved the story. Can't wait to see what happens especially if the whole family gets involved.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoExciting story. They could go back up to the hot spring and play horsey. They could playfully grope each other.
MADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years agoI have to say, you DID war, us about the slow start-up to the story...and now it has gotten Sssooo hot!
On to Chapter 2, see where this goes, now...does mom even suspect? Hhhmmm...😱😵
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