All Comments on 'The Unlikely Quarterback Ch. 01'

Good start on the story, nice back ground fill. Can't wait for the next installment.

Looking forward to seeing where the story takes us..

Thank you

I'd rather have a 4-page story where plot starts happening than 2 pages of background. Still, overall well-written.

My wife was in a similar Church. I was always pressured to join, but never did. She eventually left, and immediately shunned by those who were 'friends'. So much for 'God's' love'. Good back story, but adding a couple or three pages of actual story would be preferable.

Anon56