All Comments on 'The Unlikely Quarterback Ch. 02'

Well written but a bit of a bore. Think I'll put this novel on the back burner until you get it completed, maybe next year. Four stars for the effort.

Not with two-page chapters it's not. Well written but way too short. Fewer chapters that were bigger, even if it means a slower pace, would benefit your style and audience interest.

I think you meant Zack Morris from "Saved By The Bell" rather than Zach Braff

My son came up with a nickname for his classmate" millimeter Peter. After laughing about it, I told him not to use it, lest he be coming after you with an axe one day.

Anon56

Yes! You are correct.