All Comments on 'The Unlikely Quarterback Ch. 09'

There is way too much negativity in this guy's life.I think I shall wait until the story comes to its conclusion before reading the rest.

It was unfortunate that the one chapter you finely decide to make a decent length was the one where Mike is continuously getting crapped on but refuses to do anything about it. It was certainly a disappointing turn in this story. One sidenote is that by you describing each of these girlfriend characters in the past tense it makes it seem like none of them will be around when you finally reach the present tense, thereby making their story arc irrelevant to many readers. Just a thought.

Simone... I just thought her whole thing of not wanting his cherry, was just weird. Just knew she was going to break his heart. I'm voting for Candy to be his future love. Great series. Five Stars once again.