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All Comments on 'The Unlikely Quarterback Ch. 10'

by MaximusTheMad

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tbakkytbakkyover 4 years ago
I couldn't refrain myself

I just had to read the next chapter.

I shall miss reading this story once it ends,from your comments it looks like there might only be a couple more chapters.I have noticed that you write into the future and then you go back and fill in the story until you reach that time.

Can't you extend it to say,another 12 chapters?

Thanks for writing such an interesting story.

Crusader235Crusader235over 4 years ago
Hmm

Hmm, dumbass, Candy, Candy, Candy. Her "boyfriend" is just that. You are the Love of her life. Fun series, keep it up.

SirColin77SirColin77over 4 years ago
I want Candy

I know a girl who's tough but sweet

She's so fine, she can't be beat

She's got everything that I desire

Sets the summer sun on fire

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I am writing a part two to April Fool, so I have submitted an edited version of the first part fixing some bad dialogue and grammar. The story is that same only with phasing differences and corrections to things that didn't make sense originally. I did finally come up with a ...