All Comments on 'The Unrequited Ch. 01'

Did they add an E to St. Ann st? This is really really reeeeaaaaalllllllllyyyyyy long and drawn out. I don't need several paragraphs on smoking and bar banter. I think it could be awesome with more sex and less of everything else. Also seems like an odd category to put the story in.

Sorry it is so long, but, I did not exactly know what category to put this in. It is a Novel (with more chapters in the queue), and to be specific, it is a horror novel with sex. Erotic Horror seemed the most appropriate, as I thought the Novel people might be put off more by the HORROR than the Horror people would be put off by the length.

It is always tricky sometimes to get my stories properly categorized.

Gaius keep up the good work I'm loving the detail you put it . It makes it easier to envision the characters as though they are alive . How they'd walk talk etc .