All Comments on 'The Unwilling Competitor'

by Pinkflame

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txcrackertxcrackerabout 8 years ago
Excellent !

Great start for a series ! You & your editor did an excellent job ! Having read this start before but like the premise is great . 5*'s for your story . I enjoy were love stories .

Excellent read keep up the good work !

tx cracker

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
good start

looking forward to what happens next

hunteratvguyhunteratvguyabout 8 years ago
Awesome

Can't wait for the next submission

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great start

Can't wait for more!

avid_reader88avid_reader88about 8 years ago
Love IT

I cant wait for the next part, loving the story already!!!

wyldwulffwyldwulffabout 8 years ago
Please

I hope you continue with this story as soon as you can

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very good start

Keep going please, enjoyed this first chapter of what could be a very good story.

halobhalobabout 8 years ago
Really good...

Start! Can't wait for the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Story is really great so far!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
more please...soon

Thank you

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