All Comments on 'The Valentine Hitchhiker'

Great story hope there are more

Enjoyable read. I enjoy the knight in shining armor stories. So glad she stood up for herself when good old mom went the wrong way. I need to read more of your stories.

Great Jon. I enjoyed reading the story.

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Wonderful story 5*

Wanted the final happily ever after of the story, but otherwise a great read. 4.4*

A good story but too many misplaced names, missing words and sentences that don't make sense to give it a 5. Get an editor and it will help a lot.

Loved the story, well written (a couple of spellos) and it flowed very well. Shame you didn't give Jordan a chance to stuff the roses up her ex's butt. You have left enough room for another chapter which I hope might occur one day. Well done.

@HOG57head I am glad you like this one, it was one of my favorites to write personally.

@afosi2604 Thank you for reading, I am also a sucker for those kinds of stories so writing one made sense for valentines day, hope to see you around future content!:)

@NorthJerseyLearner and @anonymous I am glad you liked the read, thank you for reading it.

@Demosthenes384bc I like to say this is her happily ever after, the idea of an open ending to me can mean anything. Its up to the person to see exactly how her happily ever after ends. How do you see it?

I am glad you like the story :)

@anonymous hey I personally thought it made sense but to each there own, I can understand why you don't see the same thing. I am glad you enjoyed it overall, I hope to see you here in the future.

@arrow013 I am really glad you liked the story, you're right, it seems well within Jordan's right to shove the roses up her ex's butt, especially after everything he had done. I'm personally not sure if there will be a 2nd chapter because I like the idea of an open ending on this particular story but still, I hope that you stay and enjoy anymore future stories I make.

Loved everything about this story. Sad her ex deserted her, but then the perfect Tobias rescued her. Perfectly perfect!