All Comments on 'The Valentine I Do...'

I am a chocolate lover and I can now reflect on this tale while eating ...<grin tantalizing valentine tale, good luck and happy lovers day

Very sweet story. :) Good luck in the contest.

Great story.. even if it made me crave chocolate... and I'm not sposed to have chocolate.... great job.

Such a romantic story. Makes me crave some chocolate though. LOL

Good luck.

Black Tulip

can never go wrong. And a fountain? Plus a wedding and champagne and strawberries... You went all out with this one!

strawberries and pussy: Three of the greatest things to eat. However, it should have been edited better.

strawberries and pussy, three of the most wonderful things to eat. However, it should have been edited better.

and I'm about to make my own sugar fix!

Very, very sensual, and erotic. I think I need to go get some strawberries and chocolate.

Good Luck!

so hot! i love the slow buildup of the chocolate and champagne....so sensual

The sin of chocolate - so delicious. The only way to top this is for Brad, a dozen or so years hence, to reenact this moment, not on an anniversary, but to pick a day at random and surprise her completely and totally out of the blue.

should be classified as a drug...or at least...an Aprhodiasic U go L...blue

Very hot chocolat.

and chocolate? You decadent little hussy. I loved it. Great job.

romance and attention to detail...along with fruit play! very good write!