All Comments on 'The Valet'

by SapphireBlueMist

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frenchnickazzfrenchnickazzabout 12 years ago
More

Great start,want more and longer chapters too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Sequel!

I need more!

bluesky496bluesky496about 12 years ago

i love it what a lovely start write more soon

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 12 years ago
Very witty

I would love to see you do more with this definitely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
keep goin

I look forward to your developing the characters more and i hope it is a story about more than a hook-up.

SapphireBlueMistSapphireBlueMistabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thank you for all your comments and advice. Writing part 2 now!

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