All Comments on 'The Vampire Ramona'

Like this story. Or all your stories. But you keep writing them anyway.

A fair effort but I think you got a little rushed at the end.

Just the fact that you have the courage to publish is worth a better rating.

So I am going to balance the injustice and give you extra points.

if you get to feeling rushed, put it away for a week and see how it looks then.