All Comments on 'The Vampire's Mistress Ch. 05'
by FreeTheDancingLlamas
- 12 Comments
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoEager for the installment and explanation about the "mistress." I like the story but Sebastian is not a likeable character in my opinion. No matter how sweet a guy seems, if he is in a relationship with someone like Sabine, I instantly lose all respect for him. Then to find out he *stays* in that relationship and supplements it with infidelity.. pussy dries up like Sahara in no time flat. Lol
Still vested enough to keep reading, though.
Sraulersalmost 4 years agoSebastian is not only not likeable, he’s a predator. He has stalked her since he first saw her, apparently has done the same with previous housekeepers, and because he’s the big boss he gets away with it. If they don’t like being sexually harassed, they can quit or he fires them. Now he’s scored an 18 year old girl who was previously sexually abused, which he wouldn’t know since he didn’t bother getting to know her, and taken her innocence on a kitchen table. The fact that she orgasmed does not mitigate the fact that he’s unfaithful to his girlfriend with someone who didn’t want to be put into the position of sexual conquest, another notch on his bedpost. He’s groped her, sexually assaulted her and now fucked without ever getting her consent ahead of time, not in the heat of the moment. He’s a predator... this isn’t Romance, it’s non-consensual. I’m done with this one... looking forward to future submittals.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI like this 'unlikable' character'. Tired of reading novels about only likable guys. And for me, a good story is not from having likable characters. There are many great books and movies out there with unlikable characters. Also feels more real when characters have flaws. Please keep writing! I support you
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI love this story. It has a lot of great detail. I keep coming back to check for a new chapter to continue reading. I can't wait to read more 😍
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI think Julian from your other story is the better vampire right now. I get better vibes from Julian, despite the lack of action I have seen from him, cause he's stuck in his mind. There's simply something about Sebastian that throws me off him but we'll see if this changes in the next chapters.
Pops4almost 3 years agoI am very sorry you decided not to continue this story. I have enjoyed the characters, except Sabine.
As for those who do not like Sebastian, he is a Vampire. Vampires are predators, in fact, apex predators. Vampires must use the living to exist, how they use the living is rarely civilized.
Ilfen1almost 3 years agoSad that this story is abandoned. Wishing to read about what happens next. It's obvious that you've set up Sebastian to get her a pretty new dress, yes?
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