All Comments on 'The Very Hot Tub'

I think you need to finish this

Nice! More please.

How this all started would have made it a lot better 2 stars.

Not bad for a first time, though it does seem unfinished. I'd love to see the look on Carl's face if he found out that Jill has known all along, but her price for Emma to get some regular daddy dick was for Emma to eat some regular mommy pussy. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

“Come on in mom, join us”!

Hot to read about how Carl fucked his daughter and filled her Pussy of his seed. Hope Jill enjoyed to watch and will take part in their joy.

What happens...? Mom join? Would like more please

WOW!!

Nice, love Daddy/Daughter time!!!! But wonder if they are in trouble for not including mom?

I hope that’s a cliffhanger. Nicely done for your first submission.

Very very good..Keep going ASAP…

Let’s hope that mother joins them. And perhaps father can give her a baby that her husband hasn’t…

Amazing fun they had together..Love to hear her daddys cock bursting deep inside her juicy cunt.

Too fast. Take your time, build the story.

Anyone can write erotic literature, not everyone can keep people interested.

What mom does next could be very interesting.

Yummy