All Comments on 'The Virgin Bride'

by LittleTom

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FinnMacCool555FinnMacCool555about 18 years ago
Excellent piece

Can work equally well as Nonhuman or Erotic Horror. Your descriptions are vivid without becoming too focused on trivial parts. Incredibly hot! Loved the ambiguity of the ending, too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good job

I like the ending. A really good read

FlpantherFlpantheralmost 14 years ago
Outstanding!

Your story is totally outside the box...I hope there is more!!

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