All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 09'

Loving every word of this! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Thanks, Sheobrien! I'm glad you're loving it. Get ready for some fireworks next chapter... as well as an agonizing cliffhanger! ;)

Oh geezus! This is a total train wreck just waiting to happen. 🙃 I have no way to stop it and I can't force myself to look away! Damn you! 😏 5/5

Hi again ST, yes, it is a bit a wreck lol! Don't you dare turn away. There will be a reckoning for all of these misdeeds... I promise ;)

I've had only one song going through my mind repeatedly while reading this: Van Halen's "Feelin'," as it's the only thing that reflects what both characters experience in this roller-coaster, so-called "non-relationship." It hurts and frustrates to read it but damn you...you hooked me. I must be a glutton for punishment. 5

Really good story and really Good writing. The dialog feels real pretty much all the time, which definitely allowed me to become emotionally involved with these two characters. Thank you. Oh boy, more chapters to enjoy. 😊

Wow! I agree with Texan! This is a train wreck! One that I can't stop reading about. She wants to hate him to make the idea of forgetting him all the easier, but he seems to know just what to say to get her to to come back as she tries to pull away. Great story. 5⭐

Damn, VanEx!!! This is such a great book! And I don't care what the naysayers say. You are a fucking genius! The character development, the dialog, the storyline are all genius!! You have got to be a male Mensa member. I've been poking around Lit for24+ years and can count on one hand the number of authors that match your caliber or at least come close. I am truly grateful that you are here, willingly sharing, for free your time and genius with all of us. Did I mention for free??? Love you and your talent. Please don't ever, ever leave us. Seriously. 5 stars all the way!! By the way, first time commenting. Won't be the last.

This is excruciating!

I can't stop reading.

I must be masochistic.

I hate you.

I love the story.

You had better not disappoint me.

GRRRRRRR!!!!!