All Comments on 'The Virtual Cyber Sex Pond'

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Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Your story

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great story

love the twist at the end. Just please, please spell correctly, it ruins the imagery to come across 'her wonton mouth'. A wonton is a japanese dumpling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

I liked the intensity and the twist at the end was great!

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