The Visitor

Good job, well put together in a tidy well written package. thanks

Nice.

Well told. Thank you.

She out-snookered him and had as a good a life as he did.

Thanks for sharing.

Not what I expected and not that much of a love story. More of a double cheating story with a so-so ending. Of course the divorce has to be no-fault because she was cheating just as much as he was. A very sad state of affairs except maybe for Author. He got rid of a cheating wife, kept his job, his promotion, half of the house sale and was able to marry Dee. The kids must have been so screwed up they will probably need years of therapy.

Decent enough story,but you painted the wife as a lying cheater also. She is no better than he is.

There were elements of detective fiction, which made it even more interesting to me.

Wow, Slow N Gentle is back! Are you reposting all of your old work? You have some diamonds in there! Can't wait!

A very clever and well-written story. IMHO.