All Comments on 'The Visitor Next Door'

by grayshade

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Thomas DrablézienThomas Drablézienabout 11 years ago
I loved it!

Nothing more I need to say :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Made me hard!

What a dreamy situation that would be! Even the homo guy sex was hot. Got to be open minded! Can't wait for the story of the four of them fucking together! And will Jennie do Erika? Will Zoran do Erika after she's sixteen? Will Dad and Mom do Erika?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
There are only two writers for me who make such amazing stories...

...yes you and Bigrimmstales who was linked to this one by the recommendations list. I loved this, the teasing curiosity it created not only in the players but mirrored in the reader. This was Swingtown without the censorship!

sparktjsparktjalmost 5 years ago

Oh fuck, this got me so hard. Excellent writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing

You write so well. Thia covered so many taboos very gracefully. It was erotic but not cheap or gross. It read like it could actually happen. Loved it. I was rock hard from the beginning to end.

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