All Comments on 'The Visitors'

by Jimyfoxx

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AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

Sequel please. a nice incestuous foursome, with Ava and Dani getting spit roasted and double penetrated would be good.

AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

Four stars only. Get an editor immediately. There were some really weird errors in the story. The plot was ok but the execution was terrible.

happymuffinhappymuffin3 days ago

I really thought during the middle this would go the cuckold son route and i was super excited so disappointing at the end :(

MelwinsMelwins3 days ago

This would have been 5 stars for me if it had a real ending or if you continued it on. All you needed was a little chapter with the aliens saying that they came to make them incestuous and they completed their quest and then they leave and mom and son live a happily every after life

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Just an above average guy with an over active imagination trying to create a titillating story or two. If you are looking for quick cheap sex with no plot-- look elsewhere.