All Comments on 'The Voice - On the Train Pt. 01'

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FudgeBunnyFudgeBunnyabout 3 years ago
Loved it

This was great! Please write more

Msss_MistyMsss_Mistyabout 3 years ago
Lovlei

The Ned was a bit confusing but the tension, reasoning, desorption and setting were just- 👌

Raven7890Raven7890about 3 years ago
So hot

I loved it! Would have been even hotter to just be a stranger hook up IMO but seriously great writing!

bluebelle0325bluebelle0325about 3 years ago
Ending???

That first part was SO hot, but I have no idea what happened at the end. Please continue with part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Switch on

Wow camping n hoping for another part to continue lol

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